feedback based on our target audience

Feedback that received from our first draft audience screening were comment such as ;
The quality of the sound used in our scene were not professional and consistent throughout the whole title sequence.
RE filming needs to be done so the scenes are not shaky because the directing and the camera was unstable and caused the camera to film material that was unsteady.
There were other comments do to with issues of acting and continuity.

So based on this feedback we re filmed and decided not to use the sound that was picked up on the camera as the sound quality sounded faint and there were certain sounds we didn't want in scenes, and as a group we decided to use foley sounds to improve the sounds in our title sequence.